The Waltz Wave: The Waltz Wave

Tonight at the short form poetry workshop, we learned about a form called The Wave Waltz.  After a life time of surfing, of course wave dancing came to mind.  So, what are the rules? Accepting the format as presented in the class:”

“What is the Waltz Wave
•    The Waltz Wave consists of one 19-line stanza, divided into 38 syllables.
•     Each line has a specific number of syllables as follows:
1, 2, 1, 2, 3, 2, 1, 2, 3, 4, 3, 2, 1, 2, 3, 2, 1, 2, 1.
•    resembles a wave on its side
•    acceptable to break words into separate syllables to make them fit into the lines.  For instance the phrase:  “Take your pillow” could be used on the first three lines of a Waltz Wave as:  “Take/your pil-/low.”
•   An invented form by Margaret Carlisle, the managing editor of Sol Magazine, for Leo Waltz, the Web Manager of Sol.
How do you write a Waltz Wave
•    19 lines – 38 syllables
•    Can use enjambment between lines (split a word by syllable)”
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The Wave Waltz
by Michael Romani

1  Ride
2  The wave
1  Pride
2  We save
3  A slow dance
2  Shore chance
1  A
2  Romance
3  The Wave Waltz
4  Sipping cold malts
3  Afterward
2  It stirred
1  The
2  Magic
3  Inside us
2  Kill buzz
1  So
2  Slowly
1  Danced

(c) April 18, 2017 Michael Romani

 

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